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The sun sets in the midnight sky,
yet orange streaks still shine.
Darkness reaches forth it's hand
and slowly entwines with mine.

The dew lends it's immortal kiss
beneath it's darkening shrouds.
The magic of the moonlit night
is summoned from the clouds.

I hold my breathe in anticipation
of the wind's gentle embrace,
knowing this freedom will only last
til the kiss of dawn is upon my face.
©2008-2009 *cruel-dreams
:iconcruel-dreams:

Author's Comments

This poem means many different things to many different people. I have always loved this one, it is my favorite of all the poems that I have written. To me it is finding the beauty in the darker aspects of life. The picture was one that I took one night as the sun was going down.

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:iconretluc:
This is very good...there is a lot of emotion in it. It is very beautiful. You are a great poet.

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"Seek not, my soul, the life of Immortals; but enjoy to the full the resources that are within thy reach." (Pindar)

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:iconcruel-dreams:
Thank you, it's one of my favorites.
:iconretluc:
It is one of mine now as well.

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"Seek not, my soul, the life of Immortals; but enjoy to the full the resources that are within thy reach." (Pindar)

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:iconcruel-dreams:
Thank you again... That means a lot to me...
:iconmangaka101:
Amazing job!! I love it^_^

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"Criticizing is easy, art is difficult." -Unknown
"Happy are those who dream dreams and are ready to pay the price to make them come true." -Unknown
:iconcruel-dreams:
Thank you so much, you do not realize how much that means to me. It is one of my favorites. I am glad that you like it.
:iconmangaka101:
You're very welcome!!! :D

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"Criticizing is easy, art is difficult." -Unknown
"Happy are those who dream dreams and are ready to pay the price to make them come true." -Unknown
:iconxdeathsxlullabyx:
im speechless....

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"Even if I say, it'll be alright, still I hear you say, you want to end your life....." Never to Late- Three Days Grace
:iconcruel-dreams:
is that a good speechless or a bad speechless?

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